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JesseMarkowitzandClaude Opus 5 b7005e6fdd M5: genre-neutral authoritative narrative state, with review corrections
Replaces AI-DnD's RPG relative-delta world state with the genre-neutral typed
narrative state of ADR 010: explicit, absolute, allowlisted events proposed by
the model, validated by the application, applied to one authoritative document,
and snapshotted per position so restore stays a row read.

This commit includes the corrective pass that followed the independent review
in planning/reports/M5-IMPLEMENTATION-REPORT.md. The invariant it exists to
hold is:

    visible active transcript position == stored head == authoritative state

Narrator editing (D10, STORY-BRANCH-SEMANTICS §§14-15)

  A narrator edit no longer rewrites a row. It returns to the state before the
  turn, takes the reader's exact text as the accepted narration, re-derives the
  state that text implies, and becomes a new active continuation — while the
  original narration keeps its words, its live flag and its whole future as
  retained history. At the tip the correction is another take; with story below
  it, it forks. No new history machinery: this is the existing fork/take/head
  path with the reader's text in place of a generated reply. The §14A refusal
  is therefore gone for narrator turns, and remains only for player input.

Pre-M5 positions

  Migration 88 backfills the empty narrative document onto every action written
  before M5, and a missing snapshot now restores the empty document instead of
  leaving the previous position's state standing. Restoring to an old Save
  Point no longer leaves a later position's entities and facts on screen.

Narrator context

  Replayed history carries prose only; the machine-readable block is no longer
  reconstructed into past turns, where it contradicted the authoritative state
  in the same prompt. A fact withdrawn by a manual correction is now named as
  no longer true, with the reader's reason, rather than silently dropped.

Also

  - state_changes joins the action-list bulk read, removing one query per row.
  - Extraction takes only the application's own protocol payload: an ordinary
    ```json or ```python block in a story survives, and a mangled proposal
    still does not reach the reader.

Planning: ADR 013 records the authoritative document shape; §§14-15/14A, D10,
C04 and BUILD-MILESTONES are updated to describe what exists. Debt is recorded
against M8 (scenario editor UX) and M9 (export of the audit trail).

Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 5 <noreply@anthropic.com>
Claude-Session: https://claude.ai/code/session_01PWU4gTfLYY6Qq9U7aa9Qw2
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# M4 Implementation Review Report
**Milestone:** M4 — Named Save Points / Checkpoints
**Reviewed:** 2026-09-03
**Tree reviewed:** `e08d49c`, working tree clean, nothing staged or untracked
**Reviewer note:** this document is the input to M4's acceptance decision. It does
not accept M4, and it does not authorize M5.
---
# A. Executive Result
```text
PASS WITH CORRECTIVE WORK REQUIRED
```
M4's Definition of Done is met and demonstrated:
> The user can create a named Save Point, continue, restart, restore it, and
> continue differently without losing later history.
Every clause of that sentence was exercised against a running server across a
genuine operating-system process restart, and the load-bearing architectural
constraint holds under inspection rather than merely by assertion: **restore is
head movement**, and the only head-field assignment M4 introduced anywhere in the
backend lives in `head.py`, not in the checkpoint router.
The corrective work is **not** in the head model. Three findings are recorded in
§R, none of which changes what the feature does:
1. `GET /checkpoints` is an N+1 that fetches whole `Action` rows including prose —
53 SELECTs for 25 Save Points against 4 for the comparable branch endpoint,
in a codebase that keeps a regression test specifically about this class of
mistake (**medium**, M4 corrective);
2. deleting a branch silently deletes Save Points that name it, and the branch
panel's confirmation does not say so — M4 added a consequence to an existing
destructive action without updating its warning (**medium**, M4 corrective);
3. the automated D11/L03 tests restart a client, not a process, so the shipped
suite is weaker than the claim it is named for (**low**, M4 corrective).
## Qualifications, stated up front
- **The browser smoke test was NOT PERFORMED, for M4 and still for M3.** No
usable browser exists in this environment (§M). Every browser-facing claim in
this report is source inspection plus an HTTP-level equivalent, and is labelled
as such. This is now an open condition on two consecutive milestones.
- **There are no frontend tests at all**, so the Save Point panel has zero
automated coverage. That is inherited (M8 owns it), not M4's regression, but it
means §L is inspection only.
- The world state is used as **deterministic instrumentation** throughout, exactly
as `test_head_cursor.py` uses it. Nothing here endorses the RPG state model; M5
replaces it, and §U reports what M5 will have to move.
---
# B. Repository and Provenance
| Fact | Value |
| --- | --- |
| Branch | `m3-nondestructive-history` |
| M4 started from | `3c8e91f` — *Docs: correct post-M3 status and Ollama configuration* |
| M4 commits | **one**: `e08d49c` — *M4: add durable named Save Points* |
| Current HEAD | `e08d49c` |
| Signature | **Good signature**, RSA key `02C9BF7D8A4A77DF7A8905617D8AE19DB5C68569` (JesseMarkowitz) |
| Working tree | **clean** before this report; no staged, unstaged or untracked M4 files |
| Upstream ancestry | `git merge-base --is-ancestor d72f7c1b… HEAD` → **intact** |
| LICENSE | **unchanged by M4** (`git diff 3c8e91f..HEAD -- LICENSE` is empty) |
**There is no staged-but-uncommitted M4 work.** Unlike M3 — whose report had to
disclose that the milestone was staged and unsigned-commit-blocked (archived M3
report §B.1) — M4 is committed and signed. Every test result in this report was
run against that commit, with a clean tree, so *committed HEAD*, *staged* and
*unstaged* are the same tree and the distinction is not load-bearing here.
The only change made **by this reporting pass** is the report-path rotation in
§V, which touches no application code.
---
# C. Change Inventory
`git diff --stat 3c8e91f..e08d49c` — 20 files, **+2272 / −26**.
## C.1 By subsystem
| Subsystem | Files | Net | What changed |
| --- | --- | --- | --- |
| Schema | `models.py`, `migrations.py` | +65 | `Checkpoint` model; migration 80 (index) |
| Wire schema | `schemas.py` | +66 | `CheckpointOut` / `CheckpointCreate` / `CheckpointRename`, `CHECKPOINT_NAME_MAX` |
| History | `head.py` | +34 | **one** new function, `move_to_node` |
| API | `routers/adventures/checkpoints.py` (new), `__init__.py` | +260 | five endpoints |
| Export/import | `bundle.py` | +124 | export block, planner, writer |
| Frontend | `SavePointPanel.jsx` (new), `index.jsx`, `api.js`, `play.css` | +352 | panel, toolbar button, client, styles |
| Tests | `test_save_points.py` (new), `test_tree_migration.py` | +1140 | 42 new tests; one fixture repair |
| Docs | 6 `.md` files | +231 | recorded during implementation |
**Files added (3):** `backend/app/routers/adventures/checkpoints.py`,
`backend/tests/test_save_points.py`,
`frontend/src/pages/Play/panels/SavePointPanel.jsx`.
**Files deleted:** none.
`test_tree_migration.py` was modified for a real reason, not cosmetics: its two
fixtures drop tables by hand, and `checkpoints` references `branches` and
`adventures`, so SQLite refused the drop and 24 tests errored. `checkpoints` was
added to the front of both drop lists. This is a fixture that must be extended
whenever a referencing table is added, and the added comment now says so.
## C.2 The §3 questions, answered from source
| # | Question | Answer |
| --- | --- | --- |
| 1 | What record represents a Save Point? | One row in `checkpoints` (`models.py:244`) |
| 2 | What fields? | `id`, `adventure_id`, `name` VARCHAR(120), `note` TEXT, `branch_id`, `depth`, `created_at`, `updated_at` |
| 3 | Coordinate or copy? | **Coordinate.** No transcript, state, prompt, memory, summary or branch content is stored. Verified column-by-column in §O |
| 4 | How is the position captured? | `head.node_at(db, adventure, adventure.head_depth)` — the resolved node **at the active head**; its own `branch_id`/`depth` are stored |
| 5 | How is it resolved on restore? | `_node_at()` — a direct query for the **live** action at `(branch_id, depth)`, not scoped to any path |
| 6 | What moves the head? | `head.move_to_node` → `head.move_to` (M3, unchanged) |
| 7 | Does restore call M3's mechanism? | **Yes.** §F traces it |
| 8 | Any separate state/history restoration? | **No.** §F.2 proves it by exhaustive grep of the diff |
| 9 | Does restore create a branch? | **No.** Measured in §G.2: branch count unchanged across restore |
| 10 | What creates the branch? | The **first write below the restored head**, through M3's `fork_if_behind_head` |
## C.3 The `(branch, depth)` decision
The brief permitted a coordinate rather than `DATA-MODEL.md` §8's `turn_id`. The
implementation took that permission, and review finds the choice is not merely
acceptable but **the more correct pointer**, for a reason that is demonstrable
rather than argued:
A coordinate holds every attempt at a turn, exactly one of them live. Retrying a
turn makes a new live sibling at the same coordinate. Measured (§H.4):
```text
save point at (branch 4, depth 3)
live row at that coordinate BEFORE retry: id 17 "Beat 9."
rows at that coordinate AFTER retry: id 17 (live=False), id 18 (live=True)
live row AFTER retry: id 18 "Beat 10."
Save Point still resolves: True — and now names the new live take
```
A `turn_id` pointer would have pinned row 17 — a take the story no longer tells.
The coordinate followed the story. §T recommends `DATA-MODEL.md` keep the record
of this.
---
# D. Save Point Persistence Model
```python
class Checkpoint(Base):
__tablename__ = "checkpoints"
id INTEGER PK
adventure_id INTEGER NOT NULL FK adventures(id) ON DELETE CASCADE
name VARCHAR(120) NOT NULL
note TEXT NOT NULL
branch_id INTEGER NOT NULL FK branches(id) ON DELETE CASCADE
depth INTEGER NOT NULL
created_at DATETIME NOT NULL
updated_at DATETIME NOT NULL -- onupdate; bumped by rename only
```
Confirmed by live introspection after migration (§O), not from the model file.
**`branch_id` is the node's own branch, not the branch being read at creation.**
Those differ whenever the head rests in a shared prefix. Storing the node's branch
is what keeps the pointer meaningful after the reader forks away, and it is why
`_node_at` can be a direct coordinate lookup with no lineage reasoning.
**Nothing derived is stored.** `turn`, `on_path` and `resolved` in the API
response are computed per request; only name, note and coordinate persist.
---
# E. API Review
All five endpoints are campaign-scoped under `/api/adventures/{adventure_id}`,
and all resolve the adventure through the existing `current_adventure` ownership
dependency before the handler body runs.
| Method | Path | Request | Success | Notes |
| --- | --- | --- | --- | --- |
| GET | `/checkpoints` | — | 200 `[CheckpointOut]` | newest-first |
| POST | `/checkpoints` | `{name, note?}` | **201** `CheckpointOut` | position is *not* a field |
| PATCH | `/checkpoints/{id}` | `{name?, note?}` | 200 `CheckpointOut` | label only |
| DELETE | `/checkpoints/{id}` | — | **204** | pointer only |
| POST | `/checkpoints/{id}/restore` | — | 200 `ActionPage` | takes the turn lock |
## E.1 Validation and error handling — measured
| Case | Result | Correct? |
| --- | --- | --- |
| blank name `" "` | **400** "A Save Point needs a name." | yes |
| missing `name` field | **422** (Pydantic) | yes |
| name > 120 chars | **422** | yes |
| name stored | trimmed (`" X "` → `"X"`) | yes |
| rename to blank | **400**, original name intact | yes |
| unknown checkpoint id | **404** | yes |
| unknown adventure id | **404** | yes |
| double DELETE | 204 then **404** | yes |
| coordinate no longer live | **409** + head does not move | yes |
| empty story (head at NO_DEPTH) | **400** "no turn here to save yet" | yes |
## E.2 Cross-campaign — measured
A Save Point belonging to campaign A, addressed through campaign B:
```text
POST /adventures/{B}/checkpoints/{A_sp}/restore -> 404
PATCH /adventures/{B}/checkpoints/{A_sp} -> 404
DELETE /adventures/{B}/checkpoints/{A_sp} -> 404
GET /adventures/{B}/checkpoints -> []
```
`_get_or_404` matches `checkpoint.adventure_id` against the adventure in the
path, so a foreign id is *not found* rather than *found and acted on*. This is
the right shape: it cannot restore the wrong story, and it does not leak whether
the id exists elsewhere.
## E.3 CREATE captures the active head — measured
The distinction that only exists because M3 stopped Undo deleting:
```text
head after 5 turns: (branch 1, depth 10)
head after 2 undos: (branch 1, depth 6)
Save Point created here: branch_id 1, depth 6, turn 7
captured the ACTIVE HEAD, not the tip: True
```
## E.4 LIST shape
Returns `id, adventure_id, name, note, branch_id, depth, turn, on_path,
resolved, created_at, updated_at`. `turn` (= `depth + 1`) is what the panel
shows; `on_path` and `resolved` drive the two states the panel must distinguish.
Two observations for the reviewer:
- **Ordering is newest-created-first, not story order.** The implementation's
stated reason is sound — depths on lines that have parted company are not
comparable, so story order would draw a sequence no reading passes through.
`BROWSER-UX-SPEC.md` §25 does not specify an order. **No defect**, but it is an
undocumented product decision; §T recommends recording it.
- `branch_id` **is** exposed. It is not used by the panel for any
branch-management purpose (the panel shows "on a path you left" instead), so
this does not leak branch complexity into the UI, but it is more than the UI
needs.
---
# F. Restore / Active-Head Integration
**This is the load-bearing review item, and it holds.**
## F.1 The trace
```text
POST /adventures/{id}/checkpoints/{cp}/restore checkpoints.py:217
-> _get_or_404(db, adventure, cp) checkpoints.py:81 ownership
-> turns.acquire_turn_lock(adventure_id) turns.py same lock as undo/redo
-> _node_at(db, adventure, branch_id, depth) checkpoints.py:38 coordinate -> live Action
-> None => HTTPException(409); head unmoved
-> head.move_to_node(db, adventure, node) head.py:335 THE MOVER
-> lineage.path_of(...).uncapped().contains(node) is it on this line?
-> (only if not) adventure.head_branch_id = node.branch_id head.py:346
-> head.move_to(db, adventure, node.depth) head.py:302 M3, UNCHANGED
-> attempts.restore_state(adventure, node_at(...)) M3, UNCHANGED
-> adventure.updated_at; db.commit()
-> current_window(db, adventure) paging.py the same window undo/redo return
```
`head.move_to` and `attempts.restore_state` are M3 code, untouched by M4
(`git diff 3c8e91f..HEAD -- backend/app/head.py` adds a function and changes no
existing line; `attempts.py` is not in the M4 diff at all).
## F.2 Did M4 build a second mechanism? — exhaustive grep of the diff
Every added backend line matching each forbidden category:
```text
writes head fields: 2 hits
head.py:346 adventure.head_branch_id = node.branch_id
checkpoints.py node = head.node_at(db, adventure, adventure.head_depth) [a READ]
forks / prunes / recomputes: 0 hits
(branch_at|tree.fork|forget_node|redo_target|restore_state|refresh_head|mark_superseded)
deletes rows: 1 hit
checkpoints.py db.delete(checkpoint) [the pointer row itself]
```
Independently confirmed: `grep "head_branch_id = \|head_depth = "` against
`checkpoints.py` returns **nothing**. The single assignment lives at
`head.py:346`.
So M4 introduced **no** separate code that sets head fields in a router,
reconstructs state, filters the transcript, prunes memories, calculates Redo, or
creates branches.
## F.3 The one architectural call M4 had to make
`move_to_node` moves the **branch** half of the head only when the coordinate is
not on the uncapped path being read. ADR 012 defines the head as a
`(branch, depth)` coordinate but does not say what restoring to a coordinate on a
*departed* line should do.
Both directions were verified, and both matter:
- **Conditional is required for correctness.** After a divergence, restoring to a
Save Point in the shared prefix must leave the reader on the *new* line. Test
`test_restore_onto_an_inherited_position_keeps_the_line_being_read` asserts the
head branch is unchanged and Redo walks into the new continuation. Moving
unconditionally would silently hand back the abandoned story.
- **The move is required for §19.** A Save Point survives divergence, so one can
name a position on a displaced line, which no depth movement reaches. Test
`test_a_save_point_on_a_line_the_story_left_still_restores` restores it and
lands on `(old_branch, old_depth)` with the old line's state.
**Review judgement: this needs no new ADR.** It applies ADR 012's mechanism to
both halves of a coordinate ADR 012 already defines. `TECHNICAL-DESIGN.md` §8.8
records it, which is the right home. §T concurs with the implementation's own
decision not to write ADR 013.
## F.4 Behaviour equivalence, measured
`test_restore_is_the_same_head_movement_undo_makes` asserts that arriving at a
position by Restore and arriving by Undo produce an identical
`(head, world state, transcript)` triple. It passes.
---
# G. Non-Destructive Restore and Divergence
The §6 scenario, run with objective identifiers.
## G.1 Restore keeps everything
```text
5 turns played; head (branch 1, depth 10); 11 rows
Save Point "Before entering the abbey" -> branch 1, depth 6
row ids BEFORE restore: [1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11]
row ids AFTER restore: [1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11]
RESTORE DELETED ZERO ROWS: True <- identity, not a count
head after restore: (branch 1, depth 6) == the Save Point
world state: gold 30 (was 50 at the tip)
transcript ends at: "Beat 3."
can_redo after restore: True
```
Redoing twice returns to the tip with **transcript identical** and **gold
identical** to before the restore.
## G.2 Divergence is caused by the write, not by Restore
```text
branches BEFORE the divergent write: [1] <- after restore; restore created nothing
branches AFTER the divergent write: [1, 2]
FORK CAUSED BY THE WRITE: True
can_redo after divergence: False
POST /redo after divergence: 400
all original row ids present: True
```
The resulting tree, showing the displaced future retained on branch 1 while the
active line continues on branch 2:
```text
id br depth live text
1 1 0 True The road forks
2 1 1 True > You turn 0.
…
7 1 6 True Beat 3. <- the Save Point's coordinate
8 1 7 True > You turn 3. ┐
9 1 8 True Beat 4. │ displaced future, retained on branch 1
10 1 9 True > You turn 4. │
11 1 10 True Beat 5. ┘
12 2 7 True > You go aroun ┐ new continuation on branch 2
13 2 8 True Beat 6. ┘
```
## G.3 The Save Point survives its own divergence
After the fork, the Save Point still reports `(branch_id 1, depth 6)` —
unchanged — and restoring it again returns to that position on the *new* line.
`STORY-BRANCH-SEMANTICS.md` §19 and §21 are satisfied.
---
# H. Save Point Durability
| Operation | Save Point survives? | Evidence |
| --- | --- | --- |
| ordinary continuation | yes | §G, and every test in the module |
| Undo | yes | `test_restore_after_undo_and_redo_activity_lands_where_the_name_says` |
| Redo | yes | same |
| **Retry** | yes, **and follows the new live take** | §H.4 below |
| Restore | yes | `test_restoring_the_same_save_point_repeatedly_is_stable` |
| restore + divergence | yes, coordinate unchanged | `test_d13_the_save_point_still_names_the_same_position_after_divergence` |
| rename | yes, coordinate unchanged | `test_rename_changes_the_label_and_not_the_coordinate` |
| **OS process restart** | yes | §H.5 — real two-process run |
| branch deletion | **NO — cascaded away** | §R-2; by design, but unwarned |
## H.1–H.3 Positions and multiplicity
| Case | Result |
| --- | --- |
| Save Point at campaign opening/root | restores to the opening; gold 0 |
| Save Point at the current tip | restore is a no-op; head/state/transcript identical |
| created while head is behind the retained tip | saves the **undone** position (§E.3) |
| several Save Points at different positions | each restores to its own transcript and state |
| two Save Points at one position | allowed; both restore correctly |
| repeated restore of one Save Point | stable across 3 consecutive restores |
**No uniqueness is imposed on names or positions.** Nothing in the product
requirements asks for it. §T recommends this be recorded rather than left
implicit.
## H.4 Retry — the strongest evidence for the coordinate design
```text
save point at (branch 4, depth 3)
live row at that coordinate BEFORE retry: id 17 "Beat 9." live=True
rows at that coordinate AFTER retry: id 17 "Beat 9." live=False
id 18 "Beat 10." live=True
Save Point resolves: True restore: 200, head (4, 3)
```
## H.5 Restart — a real process boundary
The shipped tests restart a *client*, not a process (§R-3). For this review the
sequence was re-run over HTTP against `uvicorn`, with the server **killed** and a
**second process** started on the same database file:
```text
[server process 1] save point "Before entering the abbey" at depth 5
state at save point: gold 6
state at tip: gold 28 (14 rows)
--- process 1 killed; port confirmed dead (probe 000); process 2 started ---
[server process 2] PASS D11 Save Point survives an OS process restart
PASS D11 name survived
PASS D11 coordinate survived (branch 1, depth 5)
PASS story survived the restart
PASS L03 transcript restored after restart (6 turns)
PASS L03 STATE restored after restart gold 28 -> 6
PASS restore deleted zero rows 14 == 14
PASS later history still present 14 == 14
PASS Redo available before divergence
9/9 passed
```
## H.6 Undocumented limits found
- name capped at **120** characters (422 beyond); not stated in any planning doc.
- `note` is capped by the shared `Prose` type at 50 000 characters.
- no cap on the **number** of Save Points per campaign. With the §R-1 N+1, a
campaign with many Save Points makes the list endpoint linearly slower. Not a
present danger; recorded.
---
# I. Export / Import (I04)
## I.1 Representation
Bundle format is **unchanged**: `ai-dnd-adventure-v2`, no version bump. A new
top-level `checkpoints` array:
```json
{
"name": "Before entering the abbey",
"note": "door was locked",
"branch": 0,
"depth": 4,
"createdAt": "2026-09-03T22:53:52.611529"
}
```
`branch` is the file-local branch index, as every other branch reference in the
bundle is; `depth` needs no translation. This follows the module's stated rule —
a bundle carries what was *chosen* — and a named position is not recoverable from
the turns, so it belongs in the file. No bump is correct: an absent key is
unambiguous, which is the same reasoning `headDepth`, the persona block and the
branch disposition already rely on.
## I.2 Round trip — measured
Source: three Save Points across **two** branches, head deliberately left behind
the tip.
```text
source head: (branch 2, depth 6) [behind the tip]
source save points: ('On the new road', 2, 6) ('In the cloister', 1, 8)
('Before entering the abbey', 1, 4)
import -> 201
imported save points: ('On the new road', 4, 6) ('In the cloister', 3, 8)
('Before entering the abbey', 3, 4) all resolved=True
distinct branches among them: 2
row ids differ from source: True (fresh rows)
branch ids remapped 1->3, 2->4: True
imported story == source story: True
imported opens undone (can_redo): True
```
Restoring each imported Save Point in the new campaign lands on a **different**
head with a **different** state, proving the coordinates were remapped correctly
rather than collapsed:
```text
restore 'On the new road' -> 200, head (4,6), 7 turns, gold 30
restore 'In the cloister' -> 200, head (3,8), 9 turns, gold 40
restore 'Before entering the abbey' -> 200, head (3,4), 5 turns, gold 20
```
## I.3 The head stays authoritative
Save Points are written by `_write_checkpoints`, which runs **after**
`_point_the_head` and only inserts rows. The imported head came from `headDepth`,
and the campaign opened undone. `test_i04_an_import_opens_where_the_bundle_was_read_not_at_a_save_point`
is the clean assertion (`saved["depth"] < head_depth`), because in the ad-hoc run
above the head depth and one Save Point's depth coincided by construction.
## I.4 Malformed and pre-M4 files
```text
pre-M4 bundle (no `checkpoints` key): 201, save points [], story intact, head honoured
malformed checkpoints: 201, survivors: ['Real one']
dropped: depth 9999 (off the end), blank name, branch 77 (no such branch),
missing depth, a bare string
```
Dropping rather than refusing is a deliberate asymmetry with the head depth, and
review finds it correct: a misplaced head corrupts every read in the file, while
a bookmark pointing outside the story affects only itself. Rejecting a whole
campaign to protect one bookmark would lose the story to save the pointer.
**I04: PASS.**
---
# J. State Reconstruction (L03)
Restore restores state because `head.move_to` calls `attempts.restore_state` with
the node at the destination — the M3 contract, unchanged. M4 added no state code.
Measured, across the real process restart of §H.5:
```text
state at the Save Point (before advancing): gold 6
state at the tip (4 further turns): gold 28
--- process killed and restarted ---
after restore: gold 6 exact
transcript: 6 turns exact
rows: 14 == 14 nothing deleted
```
The in-suite equivalents (`test_l03_*`) also pass. **L03: PASS**, on the
process-boundary evidence.
The world state is instrumentation here. What is actually demonstrated is that
*the state belonging to a position returns when the head returns to it*, which is
a property of the snapshot contract, not of the RPG schema. See §U.
---
# K. Context / Memory Lineage
M4 wrote no memory or context code. The claim under review is that head-capped
behaviour follows *automatically* through a Save Point restore. It does.
## K.1 Eligibility narrows and widens — measured
```text
memory written at the new line's head; visible: ['MEM-NEW-LINE']
after restoring behind it, visible: [] rows still: 1
after redo, visible: ['MEM-NEW-LINE'] rows still: 1
```
Nothing was pruned, deleted or re-embedded — the row count is 1 throughout. The
memory left and rejoined the story because `lineage.Path` caps at the head.
## K.2 E-series through a Save Point restore
| Test | Result | Evidence |
| --- | --- | --- |
| **E01** abandoned future cannot affect active state | PASS | `test_e01_a_memory_past_a_restored_head_stops_being_retrievable`; §G.1 shows state comes back to the restored position |
| **E01** old-future memory absent on a new continuation | PASS | `test_e01_an_old_futures_memory_stays_out_of_a_new_continuation` — still absent after the new line grows *past* the old depth |
| **E04** transcript holds only the active lineage | PASS | `test_e04_the_transcript_after_a_restore_holds_only_the_active_lineage` — displaced rows present in the tree, absent from the read |
## K.3 What could not be fully exercised — stated, not papered over
- **E03 / summaries over a long story.** The summary anchor is a `(branch, depth)`
coordinate read through the same capped path, so it should behave; but no
long-run campaign was played, and M3's report carried the same limitation to
M6/M11. **Inherited from M3, not demonstrated by M4.**
- **Scene state (§9's "location/scene state").** There is no scene subsystem yet —
it is M5 work. What exists is the world-state snapshot, which §J shows follows
the head. **NOT APPLICABLE at M4**, and it must not be read as scene state
being complete.
- **Real embedding-based retrieval.** The memory tests assert *eligibility* via
the lineage clause, not ranking through a live embedding model. That is the
same instrumentation M3 used.
---
# L. Browser UX — inspection only
**No browser was available (§M), so nothing in this section is observed
behaviour.** It is source inspection of `SavePointPanel.jsx` (209 lines),
`index.jsx` and `api.js`.
## L.1 Required surfaces exist
| `BROWSER-UX-SPEC.md` | Implemented | Where |
| --- | --- | --- |
| §4 Save Point in the control bar beside Undo/Redo/Retry | yes — `⚑ Save Point`, opens the panel | `index.jsx` toolbar |
| §23 label is "Save Point" | yes | throughout |
| §24 create dialog with a name, note optional | yes — form with name + optional note | panel |
| §25 list with Restore / Rename / Delete per entry | yes | panel |
| §26 restore confirmation explaining non-destructiveness | yes (wording differs, meaning matches) | panel |
| §27 delete confirmation clarifying no story is deleted | yes (wording differs, meaning matches) | panel |
## L.2 Terminology
Every occurrence of *branch*, *fork*, *node*, *head* and *lineage* in the panel is
in a **code comment or a CSS class name**. Zero appear in rendered text. A Save
Point on a departed line reads `· on a path you left`, and an unresolvable one
reads `· this moment is no longer in the story`.
**One deviation:** the spec's §25 sample shows `Turn 42`; the panel renders
`Moment 7`. "Moment" is the word the existing branch panel already uses
(`forked at moment N`), so this is internal consistency against a spec example.
**Not a defect**; §T asks the reviewer to rule on which word wins.
## L.3 Confirmation copy
| Spec meaning | Implemented text |
| --- | --- |
| "story will return… later history retained but no longer active" | "The story will return to this Save Point. Everything you wrote after it is kept — it just stops being where you are." |
| "deleting this save point does not delete story history" | "Delete this Save Point? Deleting it does not delete any of the story — only the name you gave this moment." |
Both required meanings are carried. The spec presents its text as an
explanation to convey, not a string to copy.
## L.4 UI-state audit
| Risk | Finding |
| --- | --- |
| stale list after create | handled — `setTick` refetches; form clears |
| stale list after rename/delete | handled — `run()` refetches on success |
| Restore does not refresh transcript/state | handled — `onRestored` → `adoptWindow`, the same callback the branch switch uses, which replaces the window and bumps `stateKey` |
| wrong enabled/disabled state | Restore is disabled when `!resolved`, with a `title` explaining why; row buttons disable on `busyId`; create disables on `saving` and on an empty name |
| editor closes on a refusal | handled — `run()` returns a boolean and rename keeps the editor open on failure |
| error path invisible | handled — errors route to the page toast via `onError` |
| double-click | mitigated by `busyId` / `saving`; not eliminated (React state is async), same exposure as the existing branch panel |
| modal does not close | the confirmations are inline, not modal; both close on success and on Cancel/Keep |
**Minor, non-blocking:** a successful restore triggers **two** list fetches — one
from `run()`'s `setTick`, one from `refreshKey` changing when `adoptWindow` bumps
`stateKey`. Harmless; recorded in §S.
---
# M. Browser Smoke Testing
## M.1 M4 browser smoke test — **NOT PERFORMED**
No usable browser exists in this environment. Re-checked at review time:
```text
DISPLAY / WAYLAND_DISPLAY unset
google-chrome / chromium NOT FOUND
firefox /usr/bin/firefox (snap)
geckodriver /snap/bin/geckodriver
Xvfb / xvfb-run NOT FOUND
selenium (py) ModuleNotFoundError
playwright / puppeteer / cypress (node) 0 packages
```
Firefox was tried directly rather than assumed unusable. It prints
`*** You are running in headless mode.` and then emits snap mount-namespace
errors on every invocation and **hangs past 90 s on a trivial
`--screenshot about:blank`, producing no file**. `geckodriver` is present but has
no working browser to drive and no client library to drive it with.
**This test is NOT PERFORMED. It is not a PASS and must not be recorded as one.**
Unverified by observation: that the panel renders, that buttons enable and
disable correctly, that the confirmations appear, that Restore visibly moves the
transcript, and that the error toast is visible.
## M.2 M3 browser smoke test — **STILL NOT PERFORMED**
Reported separately and deliberately: this is M3's outstanding acceptance
condition, unchanged since the M3 report's §M.2 and §W.4. M4 did not perform it
and did not touch the Redo control's wiring.
**Two consecutive milestones now carry an unperformed browser requirement.** §R
records this as a standing acceptance risk rather than a defect in either
milestone's code.
## M.3 What was done instead
The §17 twenty-step sequence was driven over HTTP against a live `uvicorn`
process with a real process restart. **17/17 checks passed**, and the
D11/L03 subset was independently re-run for this review (§H.5, 9/9). This
exercises every endpoint the buttons call and every server-side behaviour the
sequence covers. It cannot exercise the DOM.
---
# N. Automated Test Results
All runs against `e08d49c`, clean tree.
| Suite | Command | Result |
| --- | --- | --- |
| **Full backend** | `pytest tests/ -q` | **680 passed**, 0 failed, 0 skipped, 1 warning, 167.85 s |
| **M4 targeted** | `pytest tests/test_save_points.py -q` | **42 passed**, 20.16 s |
| **M3 invariants** | 8 modules (head cursor, forking, branch mgmt, retry, take state, take edit, bundle v2, memory nodes) | **130 passed**, 54.73 s |
| **Security / local-only** | endpoint policy, TLS trust, local-only surface, offline assets, egress | **93 passed**, 9.23 s |
| **Frontend lint** | `npm run lint` | exit **0**; 7 warnings, byte-identical to the pre-M4 baseline |
| **Frontend build** | `npm run build` | exit **0** |
| **Docker build** | `docker build -t storyteller-m4-review .` | exit **0** |
Baseline before M4 was 638 passed. **680 − 638 = 42**, matching the M4 module
exactly: no existing test was deleted, and none was weakened to obtain green.
The one existing test file M4 modified (`test_tree_migration.py`) had a fixture
repaired, not an assertion changed — its 30 tests still pass.
The Docker build was run because M4 changed runtime schema behaviour (a new
table). It succeeds.
## N.1 M3 invariants specifically reconfirmed
| Invariant | Status |
| --- | --- |
| Undo deletes zero accepted rows | pass (`test_the_m3_invariant_undo_deletes_zero_accepted_turns`) |
| Redo exact round trip | pass (`test_l02_state_matches_the_position_in_both_directions`) |
| divergence preserves the old future | pass, and re-measured through Restore in §G.2 |
| Redo disappears after divergence | pass, and re-measured in §G.2 (400) |
| retry / take semantics | pass (`test_retry_variants`, `test_take_state`, `test_take_edit`) |
| active-head export/import | pass (`test_bundle_v2`, I07 in `test_head_cursor`) |
| memory isolation | pass (`test_memory_nodes`), re-measured through Restore in §K.1 |
---
# O. Migration / Backward Compatibility
## O.1 What M4 adds
**Migration 80**, the only one: `CREATE INDEX IF NOT EXISTS
ix_checkpoints_adventure ON checkpoints (adventure_id)`. The **table** is created
by `Base.metadata.create_all`, which `bootstrap` runs before the migration loop
on existing databases as well as fresh ones — the same route `memories` (v2) and
`branches` (v46) took. No backfill.
## O.2 A representative pre-M4 database — measured
A realistic M3 campaign was built (adventure, branch with lineage, 5 actions, a
memory), then its `checkpoints` table dropped and the stamp set to 79.
```text
BEFORE stamp 79, checkpoints table present: False
AFTER stamp 80 (LATEST_VERSION = 80), checkpoints present: True
columns id INTEGER NOT NULL | adventure_id INTEGER NOT NULL | name VARCHAR(120) NOT NULL
note TEXT NOT NULL | branch_id INTEGER NOT NULL | depth INTEGER NOT NULL
created_at DATETIME NOT NULL | updated_at DATETIME NOT NULL
indexes ix_checkpoints_adventure (adventure_id)
FKs adventure_id -> adventures ON DELETE CASCADE
branch_id -> branches ON DELETE CASCADE
campaign untouched: ('An M3 campaign', head_depth 4, head_branch_id 1)
action rows 5 | memory rows 1 | phantom save points 0
second bootstrap: ok, stamp still 80 [idempotent]
```
An existing campaign with no Save Points **opens unchanged, with none invented**.
## O.3 Cascades and orphans — measured at the DB level
SQLite foreign keys are enforced (`database.py` sets `PRAGMA foreign_keys=ON` per
connection), so both cascades are real:
```text
DELETE branch -> checkpoints on it: 1 -> 0
DELETE adventure -> checkpoints in it: 1 -> 0
orphan count (checkpoints with no adventure): 0
NULL branch_id -> IntegrityError: NOT NULL constraint failed
```
Via the API, deleting a campaign leaves **zero** orphaned checkpoint rows.
**Checkpoint rows cannot become orphaned.**
## O.4 Constraints on M5–M9
- The coordinate is `(branch_id, depth)` with a **NOT NULL** branch. If a later
milestone introduces a position that is not on a branch, this schema will need
a migration. Nothing planned through M9 requires that.
- The `checkpoints` table is **not** among the inert legacy tables awaiting the
post-M5 cleanup migration, and should not be swept up in it.
- M5 changes what a snapshot *contains*, not where a position *is*. The
coordinate is untouched by that. See §U.
---
# P. Security / Local-Only Regression
| Check | Result |
| --- | --- |
| new outbound calls | **none** — the M4 backend diff contains no `http://`, `https://`, `fetch(`, `httpx`, `urllib` or `requests` |
| telemetry / cloud dependency | none |
| new external assets | none; frontend build output has no new remote origin (`test_offline_assets` passes) |
| authentication / accounts | none; endpoints use the existing single-user ownership dependency |
| listener / binding changes | none |
| new credentials in the export | none — the `checkpoints` block carries `name`, `note`, `branch`, `depth`, `createdAt` and nothing else |
| endpoint policy / TLS | 93 security tests pass, unchanged |
## P.1 Save Point names as untrusted input
```text
name = <img src=x onerror=alert(1)>&"'
create: 201; stored verbatim; round-trips through the list unchanged
length cap 120 enforced (422)
```
The server stores names verbatim and does **not** HTML-escape them, which is
correct — escaping belongs to the renderer. The panel renders `{p.name}` and
`{p.note}` as JSX children, which React escapes; `grep` confirms **no
`dangerouslySetInnerHTML` and no `innerHTML`** anywhere in the panel. Names reach
the DOM as text.
Caveat, honestly stated: this is source inspection. Without a browser (§M) the
rendered escaping was not observed.
## P.2 Campaign scoping
A Save Point id from campaign A cannot restore, rename or delete through
campaign B — all three return 404 (§E.2). This is the one security-shaped
invariant M4 introduces, and it is covered by an automated test.
---
# Q. Acceptance Matrix
| ID | Requirement | Result | Evidence |
| --- | --- | --- | --- |
| **D11** | Named checkpoint persists across restart | **PASS** | §H.5 — real two-process restart; name and coordinate intact. `test_d11_a_named_save_point_survives_a_restart` |
| **D12** | Restore returns transcript **and** state | **PASS** | §G.1 — transcript to "Beat 3.", gold 50→30. `test_d12_restore_returns_the_transcript_and_the_state` |
| **D13** | Restore does not delete later history | **PASS** | §G.1 row-id identity `[1..11]` before and after; §G.2 Redo works pre-divergence, old future retained post-divergence, `POST /redo` → 400. Four `test_d13_*` tests |
| **D14** | Delete removes the pointer, not the story | **PASS** | `test_d14_delete_removes_the_pointer_and_no_story` — row ids, transcript and head all unchanged |
| **I04** | Save Points survive export/import | **PASS** | §I.2 — 3 Save Points across 2 branches, branch ids remapped 1→3/2→4, each restores to a distinct head and state |
| **L03** | Correct historical state after restart | **PASS** | §H.5 / §J — gold 28→6 across a real process boundary |
| **E01** | Abandoned future cannot affect active state | **PASS** | §K.1, §G.1 |
| **E01(m)** | Old-future memory absent on a new continuation | **PASS** | `test_e01_an_old_futures_memory_stays_out_of_a_new_continuation` |
| **E03** | Summary lineage over a long story | **NOT PERFORMED** | §K.3 — inherited M3 limitation, owned by M6/M11 |
| **E04** | Transcript holds only the active lineage | **PASS** | `test_e04_the_transcript_after_a_restore_holds_only_the_active_lineage` |
| **M4 browser smoke** | §17 twenty-step sequence in a browser | **NOT PERFORMED** | §M.1 — no usable browser |
| **M3 browser smoke** | M3's outstanding condition | **NOT PERFORMED** | §M.2 — unchanged since M3 |
## Q.1 Definition of Done
> The user can create a named Save Point, continue, restart, restore it, and
> continue differently without losing later history.
**MET**, clause by clause, at the API and server level:
| Clause | Demonstrated |
| --- | --- |
| create a named Save Point | §E.3 — at the active head, named |
| continue | §G.1 — 4 further turns |
| restart | §H.5 — server process killed and replaced |
| restore it | §H.5 — transcript and state exact |
| continue differently | §G.2 — divergent write forks |
| without losing later history | §G.1/§G.2 — row identity preserved throughout |
**Qualified only by §M**: the sentence describes something *a user does in a
browser*, and no browser executed it. The API-level demonstration is complete.
---
# R. Defects / Corrective Work
## R.A — BLOCKERS TO M4 ACCEPTANCE
**None found in the implementation.**
The single open item is procedural and is not M4's code:
| # | Item | Severity | Notes |
| --- | --- | --- | --- |
| A-1 | **The browser smoke test is unperformed for M4 and still for M3.** | acceptance risk | Whether this blocks is the reviewer's call, not this report's. It blocked nothing in code; §M states exactly what is unverified. Two consecutive milestones now carry it, and the trend is the concern rather than either instance. |
## R.B — CORRECTIVE WORK RECOMMENDED BEFORE M5
| # | Defect | Severity | Affected behaviour | Evidence | Owner |
| --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- |
| B-1 | **`GET /checkpoints` is an N+1 that fetches whole `Action` rows including prose.** `_rendered` calls `_node_at` (a full-entity query) plus `lineage.path_of` for **every** Save Point. | medium | Query count scales linearly with Save Points; each hits `actions` for 11 columns including `text`, all discarded except existence. | Measured: **53 SELECTs for 25 Save Points** (2.1 each), 25 against `actions`, `text` fetched. `GET /branches` costs **4** regardless of branch count. | **M4** |
| B-2 | **Deleting a branch silently deletes Save Points naming it, unwarned.** The cascade is by design (§O.3) and defensible, but `BranchPanel`'s confirmation says only *"Delete this branch and everything forked from it?"* | medium | A user deleting a branch loses named Save Points with no warning. M4 created this consequence; the copy predates it. | `grep` of `BranchPanel.jsx`: no mention of Save Points (or memories). Cascade measured in §O.3. | **M4** |
| B-3 | **The automated D11/L03 tests do not cross a process boundary.** `_restart()` closes the `TestClient` and opens a new one against the same engine in the same process. | low | The shipped suite is weaker than the acceptance item it is named for. D11/L03 pass here only because §H.5 was run by hand. | `test_save_points.py::_restart`; contrast §H.5. | **M4** |
B-1 deserves particular note: `backend/tests/test_egress.py` exists precisely
because this project has shipped two egress regressions from columns that were
fetched and discarded, and `paging.py` documents an explicit opt-in discipline
for exactly this. M4's list endpoint does not follow it. The response is only
5 224 bytes for 25 Save Points, so this is a query-count and I/O concern rather
than an egress blowout — but it is the codebase's own standard, unmet.
## R.C — NON-BLOCKING DEBT
| # | Item | Severity | Owner |
| --- | --- | --- | --- |
| C-1 | Save Point panel has **no frontend test**, because the project has no frontend test runner. | low | M8 (inherited) |
| C-2 | A successful restore triggers **two** list fetches (§L.4). | trivial | M4 or M8 |
| C-3 | `CheckpointOut` exposes `branch_id`, which the UI does not need. | trivial | M8 |
| C-4 | Panel renders **"Moment N"** where `BROWSER-UX-SPEC.md` §25 shows **"Turn N"** (§L.2). Internal consistency vs. spec example; needs a ruling, not a fix. | trivial | reviewer / M8 |
| C-5 | Create / rename / delete do **not** take the turn lock (restore does). Creating a Save Point while a turn is streaming could capture a head that is about to move. Not observed; narrow window. | low | M4 or M6 |
| C-6 | No cap on Save Points per campaign (§H.6); interacts with B-1. | low | M8 |
| C-7 | Inherited, unchanged: `POST /adventures/import` returns every branch's rows rather than a head-capped window. | low | inherited (M3) |
**No M4 defect has been assigned to M5.** B-1, B-2 and B-3 are M4's own.
---
# S. Non-Blocking Debt Carried Forward
M3's debt table was re-checked. Unchanged and still open: the RPG world-state
instrumentation in ~20 history tests (M5) — **M4 added 42 more tests using the
same instrumentation**, so M5's instrumentation move is now larger than M3's
report estimated; genre-neutral state must stay snapshot-recoverable per node
(M5); long-run summary isolation (M6/M11); no frontend tests (M8);
`Settings.model` defaults to `""` (M8); inert legacy tables awaiting the post-M5
cleanup (§O.4 notes `checkpoints` must not be swept into it).
---
# T. Planning-Document Recommendations
**No planning document was modified by this report**, other than the report-path
rotation in §V.
| Document | Recommendation | Justification |
| --- | --- | --- |
| `planning/SPECIFICATION.md` | **NO CHANGE RECOMMENDED** | M4 altered no product requirement. |
| `planning/STORY-BRANCH-SEMANTICS.md` | **NO CHANGE RECOMMENDED** | §18–25 specified checkpoint behaviour; the implementation matches, including §20 (restore does not fork), §23 (rename), §24 (no move) and §25 (delete). Nothing needed ratifying. |
| `planning/SECURITY-THREAT-MODEL.md` | **NO CHANGE RECOMMENDED** | No new path (§P). |
| `planning/TECHNICAL-DESIGN.md` | **NO CHANGE RECOMMENDED** for §8.8/§9.2, which were written during implementation and which this review confirms as accurate. | Verified against the code, not accepted on assertion. |
| `planning/DATA-MODEL.md` | **CHANGE RECOMMENDED (small)** | §8 records the coordinate choice; the **retry evidence in §C.3/§H.4 is stronger than the argument written there** and should be cited. Also add the two undocumented facts §H.6/§E.4 found: names are not unique, and the list order is by creation. |
| `planning/BUILD-MILESTONES.md` | **CHANGE RECOMMENDED** | M4's status block says "IMPLEMENTED — awaiting review". After review it needs the outcome, the three §R.B items, and a note to M5 that the instrumentation move now covers 42 more tests (§S). |
| `planning/V1-ACCEPTANCE-TESTS.md` | **CHANGE RECOMMENDED (small)** | Record D11–D14, I04, L03 results and their evidence pointers, as M1–M3 closeouts did. **Do not weaken any pass condition** — none needed weakening. Note that D11/L03 are satisfied by a real process boundary (§H.5), which is the standard future milestones should meet. |
| `planning/BROWSER-UX-SPEC.md` | **CHANGE RECOMMENDED (trivial, or rule against)** | §25's sample says "Turn 42"; the app says "Moment N" everywhere (§L.2, C-4). Either align the spec to the app's vocabulary or rule that "Turn" wins. |
| `planning/README.md` | **CHANGE RECOMMENDED at closeout, not now** | Must eventually record M4's disposition and the report rotation. This pass changed **only** the M3 report path (§V). It deliberately does **not** say M4 is accepted or M5 is authorized. |
| `planning/VERSION.md` | **CHANGE RECOMMENDED at closeout** | v2.5 records the implementation; a closeout entry should record the review outcome and any corrective work. |
## T.1 New ADR?
**No new ADR is recommended.** ADR 012 decides the architecture, and §F.3's
conditional branch move is that architecture applied to both halves of a
coordinate ADR 012 already defines — recorded in `TECHNICAL-DESIGN.md` §8.8,
which is the right home. A table and five endpoints are not an architectural
decision. This review concurs with the implementation's own restraint here.
---
# U. M5 Readiness Assessment
1. **Are Save Points stable enough for M5 to change state representation?**
**Yes.** A Save Point stores a name and a `(branch, depth)` coordinate. It
stores nothing about state, and no checkpoint code reads state.
2. **Does Restore depend only on a coordinate plus the standard snapshot
contract?** **Yes.** The chain is coordinate → `head.move_to_node` →
`head.move_to` → `attempts.restore_state`. M4 added no state code; the only
state contract it relies on is M3's "each node carries what it left behind".
3. **Is anything in M4 accidentally coupled to the RPG world-state schema?**
**No, in the product code** — `checkpoints.py`, the `Checkpoint` model and the
bundle code contain no reference to `world_state`, stats, or the delta
protocol. **Yes, in the tests**: `test_save_points.py` uses `GOLD_SCHEMA` and
gold arithmetic as deterministic instrumentation, exactly as
`test_head_cursor.py` does. M5 must **move the instrumentation and keep the
assertions** — 42 tests here, on top of the ~20 M3 flagged.
4. **Can M5 change snapshots/events while preserving Save Point behaviour?**
**Yes**, provided M5 honours the constraint `TECHNICAL-DESIGN.md` §10.4
already carries from M3: state must remain recoverable at a position without
replay. If M5 made state reconstruction proportional to campaign length, it
would degrade Save Point restore and head movement together — one constraint,
not two.
5. **Do any M4 defects block M5?** **No.** B-1, B-2 and B-3 are real and should be
fixed, but none of them touches state representation, the coordinate, or head
movement, and none would be made harder or easier by M5 landing first.
```text
M5 IS NOT BLOCKED BY M4's ARCHITECTURE.
M5 SHOULD NOT BEGIN until this report is reviewed and M4's disposition is
recorded — the project's own stop rule, not a technical finding.
```
---
# V. Final Repository State
## V.1 What this reporting pass changed
Two things, no application code:
1. **Report rotation.** `planning/reports/M3-IMPLEMENTATION-REPORT.md` →
`planning/archive/milestone-reports/M3-IMPLEMENTATION-REPORT.md`
(`git mv`; contents unedited).
2. **This report**, created at `planning/reports/M4-IMPLEMENTATION-REPORT.md`.
Six references to the old M3 path exist in active documents
(`planning/README.md` ×4, `BUILD-MILESTONES.md` ×1, `PROJECT-SOURCES.md` ×1,
`VERSION.md` ×1, `archive/README.md` index ×1). They are updated **only** where
the path changed — no status, no wording, no claim about M4's acceptance. Two
further occurrences are inside the M3 report itself, in quoted `git status`
output; those are historical contents and were **not** edited.
## V.2 Verification state
| Item | Value |
| --- | --- |
| M4 commit | `e08d49c`, **signed**, good signature |
| Tree at review | clean; all results above are from HEAD |
| Backend | **680 passed** |
| M4 targeted | **42 passed** |
| Frontend | lint exit 0 (7 pre-existing warnings), build exit 0 |
| Docker | build exit 0 |
| Upstream ancestry | intact |
| LICENSE | unchanged |
## V.3 Why M4 is not described as accepted
Because acceptance is a decision made by a reviewer reading this document, not by
the session that produced it. This report says the Definition of Done is met at
the API level, that the architecture holds under inspection, that three
corrective items exist, and that the browser requirement is unperformed for a
second consecutive milestone. What to do with that is the reviewer's call.
---
# W. M4 Closeout Addendum (2026-09-03 / 2026-09-04)
**This addendum is current where it differs from the review above**, and §W.3 is
current where it differs from an earlier draft of this addendum: B-2 was first
addressed as a warning over a surviving cascade, then reclassified as a behaviour
defect and fixed by refusing the deletion. Only the final behaviour is described
below; the review's §R still records the finding as it was raised. Sections
A-V record what was true at commit `e08d49c`, before corrective work; nothing in
them has been rewritten. Where they say a finding is open or a test is
unperformed, this section says what happened next.
## W.1 Starting state
| Fact | Value |
| --- | --- |
| Closeout started from | `279a871` — *Planning: add the M4 implementation review report and rotate M3's* |
| Closeout dates | corrective work and browser verification 2026-09-03; B-2 reclassified and re-fixed 2026-09-04 |
| Reviewed implementation | `e08d49c` — signed, unchanged by this pass |
| Working tree at start | clean; the report and rotation were already committed |
| Upstream ancestry | intact |
| LICENSE | unchanged |
## W.2 B-1 — the Save Point list N+1 is gone
`GET /checkpoints` resolved each Save Point with its own query and loaded whole
`Action` entities to do it. It now takes one bulk query over two integer columns
plus one lineage computation, both before the loop.
Measured on the same 25-Save-Point fixture the review used:
| | before | after |
| --- | --- | --- |
| SQL statements per list | **53** | **5** |
| SELECTs against `actions` | 25 | **1** |
| columns in that SELECT | 11, including `text` | **2** (`branch_id`, `depth`) |
| narration fetched | yes | **no** |
| queries per Save Point | 2.1 | 0.2 |
Three tests guard it. One asserts on *growth* rather than a fixed budget — five
times the Save Points must not mean more queries — because a fixed number is
something to edit rather than a rule to keep. One asserts the emitted SQL never
names `actions.text`, `actions.reasoning` or `actions.world_delta`. The third is
the one worth keeping: it builds a **cross-product trap**, a dead coordinate on
one branch while another branch has a live row at the same depth, and proves the
dead one still reports `resolved: false`. An `IN`-list implementation would fail
it; the OR-of-pairs passes.
`_render_all` is now the single rendering path — create and rename call it
through `_rendered` with a list of one — so the list and the single-item
responses cannot drift.
## W.3 B-2 — a branch a Save Point names cannot be deleted
The review recorded this as a missing warning. On closeout it was reclassified as
a **behaviour defect**, because the authority is unambiguous:
`STORY-BRANCH-SEMANTICS.md` §19 says a named checkpoint remains until explicitly
deleted, and §28 already requires a future cleanup feature to *retain paths
referenced by checkpoints*. A cascade that removed Save Points along with a
branch violates both, and a warning would only have documented the violation.
**The deletion is now refused.** `DELETE /branches/{id}` returns **409** when any
Save Point names a position on that branch or on anything forked from it — the
subtree, because deleting a branch takes its descendants, and a check scoped to
the named branch alone would let a Save Point on a child vanish silently.
The refusal names what stands in the way rather than only counting it:
```text
This branch, or a branch forked from it, is where a Save Point “On the new
line” is saved. Delete that Save Point first if you no longer need it, then
delete the branch. Deleting a Save Point does not delete any story.
```
Long lists truncate ("and 2 more") so the message stays a sentence someone reads.
The recovery is the point, and it is cheap: deleting a Save Point deletes no
story (§25), so the user removes the pointer and the branch then goes. Verified
end to end in the browser (§W.7 section J).
Both delete controls — the branch list and the tree overlay — now **disable**
Delete while Save Points protect the subtree and say why, and the branch row
reports `· 2 Save Points kept here`. The confirmation, now only reachable when
nothing is at risk, says plainly that the story on other paths and every Save
Point are unaffected. Two views changed, because the same deletion is reachable
from both and a rule holding in one of them would not be a rule.
`checkpoints.branch_id` keeps `ON DELETE CASCADE` as referential integrity — a
Save Point must never point at a branch that is gone — but the guard means it
does not fire through the application. Campaign deletion still cascades, which is
what deleting a campaign means.
Six tests cover the five required scenarios plus the truncation: deletion refused
and nothing lost; the Save Point intact after the refusal; explicit deletion then
allowing the branch delete; a branch no Save Point names still deleting; a Save
Point on a *descendant* also protecting; and an unrelated Save Point not blocking
anything. A source-level test asserts both views disable and explain.
**Documents this corrected beyond the planned set:** `models.py`,
`TECHNICAL-DESIGN.md` §8.8 and `DATA-MODEL.md` §8 had all recorded the cascade as
the durability rule. They now record the refusal.
## W.4 B-3 — the restart test now crosses a process boundary
`backend/tests/test_process_restart.py` (3 tests, ~9 s) starts the real
application with `subprocess.Popen`, plays a story over HTTP, **kills the
process**, starts a second process against the same database file, and only then
asks its questions. Readiness is probed, never slept on; children are terminated
in a `finally` whether or not the test passes.
It covers D11 (the Save Point, its name and its coordinate survive), L03 (the
state at the position returns), that restore deletes no rows, that Redo is
available before divergence, that the retained continuation is still walkable,
and that a divergent write after a restart still forks on the write rather than
the restore.
The old same-process helper was **not** kept as a pretend equivalent.
## W.5 C-5 — creating a Save Point is serialized
Create now takes the campaign's existing turn lock, the same one Undo, Redo and
Restore take. No new lock was introduced. "Save where I am" has to name one
committed position, and the head is exactly what a turn in flight is about to
move.
Rename and Delete deliberately **do not** take it: neither reads nor moves a
story position, and refusing a label edit during generation would be a worse
product for no safety gained. A test pins that decision so it reads as a choice
rather than an oversight, and another proves a refused create releases the lock.
## W.6 Test and build results
All against the closeout tree.
| Suite | Result |
| --- | --- |
| **Full backend** | **698 passed**, 0 failed, 0 skipped (was 680) |
| **M4 targeted** (`test_save_points.py` + `test_process_restart.py`) | **60 passed** (57 + 3) |
| **M3 invariants** (8 modules) | **130 passed** |
| **Security / local-only** (incl. `test_egress.py`) | **93 passed** |
| **Frontend lint** | exit 0; 7 warnings, unchanged from baseline |
| **Frontend build** | exit 0 |
| **Docker build** | exit 0 |
698 − 680 = 18 new tests: 3 process-restart, 4 for B-1, 7 for B-2 (the refusal
rule and its recovery), 3 for C-5, and one holding the branch-list count to the
same subtree the server refuses on. Two tests written earlier in this closeout
were **replaced**, not kept alongside: they asserted the cascade behaviour that
§W.3 removed, and leaving them would have pinned the defect.
## W.7 Browser verification — PERFORMED, and it passes
**This is the first real-browser verification in the project**, and it discharges
the condition M3 and M4 both carried.
| | |
| --- | --- |
| Browser | **Mozilla Firefox 154.0.1**, headless |
| Driver | geckodriver 0.37.1, W3C WebDriver over HTTP |
| Client | written for the run against Python's stdlib — **no dependency added to the repository** |
| App | the real production-shaped server, SPA served same-origin, deterministic scripted model |
| Result | **47/47 checks passed**, no console errors; run twice on independent fresh databases |
§M reported no usable browser, and that was true of the paths tried there: the
`firefox` snap wrapper fails with mount-namespace errors and hangs on a headless
screenshot. The binary **inside** the snap
(`/snap/firefox/current/usr/lib/firefox/firefox`) runs correctly under
geckodriver, which §M did not try. §M's conclusion is superseded; its account of
what was attempted stands.
What the browser actually did, by section of the closeout brief:
| Section | Verified in the DOM |
| --- | --- |
| **A — M3 history** | transcript renders; Undo enabled and Redo disabled at the tip; two Undos move the transcript back twice; Redo becomes enabled; two Redos return the original tip exactly |
| **B — retry / takes** | Retry produces an alternate take; the take pager appears; stepping between takes changes the visible narration; no branch vocabulary needed |
| **C — M3 divergence** | a new continuation from a moved-back head appears; Redo becomes unavailable; no stale old-future text in the active transcript; position and continuation survive a reload — with a database check confirming the displaced rows are still on disk |
| **D — creation** | Save Point created and named through the form; appears in the list; panel says **Save Point** with no branch/head/node/fork wording; position reads **Moment N** |
| **E — persistence** | still present after a full page reload |
| **F — restore** | the confirmation visibly explains later history is kept; transcript and state move back; the Save Point stays listed; Redo becomes available; zero rows deleted (database check); the view refreshes without a manual reload |
| **G — restore + redo** | Redo returns the original continuation; the Save Point survives |
| **H — restore + divergence** | the different continuation appears; Redo into the displaced future is gone; no old-future narration in the active view; the displaced rows retained on disk |
| **I — rename / delete** | rename changes the name and not the position; it still restores to the same moment; the delete warning says the story is not deleted; the row disappears with no stale list; the story remains |
| **J — branch deletion** | the branch row reports the Save Points kept on it; Delete is **disabled** and explains what to do; the server independently refuses with **409** naming the Save Point; nothing is deleted by the refusal; and the documented recovery works — deleting the Save Point frees the branch |
| **K — control state** | enable/disable states match the position; no material console errors |
**No defect was found in the application by the browser run.** Four failures
occurred and all four were in the harness: a wrong SPA route (`/adventures/:id`
rather than `/play/:id`); a wait predicate that compared transcript *length* when
the empty-story placeholder is longer than the first turn; a fixture that tried
to delete the branch it was reading, which is refused by design; and a reload
assertion that sampled the transcript once instead of waiting for it to render.
The last was checked against the application before being called a harness bug —
after a reload the text is present at the first sample, so the race was the
test's.
## W.8 Planning documents updated
`V1-ACCEPTANCE-TESTS.md` (D11-D14, I04, L03, E-series results and the browser
condition; **no pass condition weakened**), `STORY-BRANCH-SEMANTICS.md` **§19.1**
(new — a checkpoint protects the history it names; the closeout's only
behavioural specification change, and it strengthens §19),
`DATA-MODEL.md` §8, `TECHNICAL-DESIGN.md` §8.8, `BROWSER-UX-SPEC.md` §25 (Moment,
not Turn), `BUILD-MILESTONES.md` (M4 COMPLETE, the facts M5 inherits, the M5
instrumentation note), `planning/README.md`, `VERSION.md` (v2.6),
`PROJECT-SOURCES.md` and `project-sources.txt`, which still named the archived M3
report.
Unchanged, as §T recommended: `SPECIFICATION.md`, `STORY-BRANCH-SEMANTICS.md`,
`SECURITY-THREAT-MODEL.md`, `CONTEXT-AND-MEMORY.md`,
`IMPORTED-KNOWLEDGE-DESIGN.md`, ADR 003, ADR 005, ADR 012. **No ADR 013**: the
corrective work forced no architectural decision. §19.1 is a durability rule
inside an existing specification, not a new architecture — ADR 005 already says
history is preserved rather than overwritten, and refusing to delete a
checkpoint's history is that decision applied, not a departure from it.
## W.9 The architecture is unchanged
Worth stating plainly, because closeout touched the checkpoint module. A Save
Point is still `name + optional note + (branch, depth)`. Restore is still
`coordinate → head.move_to_node → head.move_to → attempts.restore_state`. The
corrective work touched **how the list is read** and **when create is allowed to
read the head** — never what a Save Point is or how restoring one moves the
story. Nothing was copied into a checkpoint, no checkpoint-specific Redo stack
exists, restore still does not fork, and the first divergent write is still what
creates the continuation.
## W.10 Remaining debt
Unchanged from §S and none of it M4's: no frontend test runner (M8) — the browser
run above is a closeout procedure, not a suite; `POST /adventures/import` returns
every branch's rows rather than a head-capped window (inherited, M3); the RPG
world-state instrumentation, now **60 tests**, moves at M5.
## W.11 Result
D11, D12, D13, D14, I04 and L03 all **PASS**. The E-series lineage results
through a Save Point restore all **PASS** (E03 remains NOT PERFORMED, owned by
M6/M11). The Definition of Done is met, and now met in a browser:
> The user can create a named Save Point, continue, restart, restore it, and
> continue differently without losing later history.
```text
M4 CLOSED — READY FOR M5
```
M5 is next to brief. It has not been started.
## W.12 What M5 inherits
Recorded here because it is the only thing this report owes the next milestone.
These are constraints, not suggestions, and none of them is M5's to revisit.
- **The inherited RPG world-state system is instrumentation, not the target
architecture.** 60 tests in this milestone use gold arithmetic to make "the
state at this position" a number a test can assert. M5 replaces the machinery
underneath and must **move the instrumentation while keeping the assertions** —
what they measure is where the story is being read and what state belongs to
that position, which is exactly as true after M5.
- **M5 implements ADR 010's genre-neutral typed narrative-state model.** That is
the target; the stat/band/cooldown protocol is what it replaces.
- **Per-position snapshots, or equivalent fast recovery, must survive the
replacement** (`TECHNICAL-DESIGN.md` §10.4). Undo, Redo and Save Point restore
all resolve a coordinate and read the state recorded there. If M5 makes state
reconstruction proportional to campaign length, it degrades all three at once.
- **M3/M4 history and Save Point semantics are infrastructure now.** The stored
head, the single movement mechanism, the capped lineage, fork-on-first-write,
and the Save Point coordinate are settled. M5 changes what state *contains*,
not how the story is positioned, and should not add a second restore path.
- **A Save Point's history is protected** (`STORY-BRANCH-SEMANTICS.md` §19.1).
Any state-cleanup or migration work M5 introduces must not acquire a way to
delete a checkpoint, or the history one names, as a side effect.
---
*End of report.*